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MiSkriBa 2024 - 17 / 04 - Blodsvept

Bardhonek #MiSkriBa an jydh ha prompt hedhyw o skrifa bardhonek usi awenys gen darn a ilow, hag a rann titel an darn na a ilow. Karer metel-poos ov, hag an myttin ma yth esen vy ow koslowes orth an gan ma, Blodsvept gen Finntroll, war an fordh dhe'n ober... (gwydhyow a-is)

#NaPoWriMo poem of the day and today's prompt was to write a poem that is inspired by a piece of music, and that shares its title with that piece of music. I'm a big metal music fan, and this morning I was listening to this song, Blodsvept by Finntroll, on the way to work... (video below)


Blodsvept

Y kammav y'n karr

"dans glas yw junyes"

ha gortos polsik

ha'n jynn ow tommhe,

ha'n betyans ow tommhe.


Tabours a weskir,

notennow a dochir

hag yth esov ow trehedhes

kans mildir y'm skovarn.


Kist an vaglen a rogh

ow tremena tirwedhow

dyjiow koskus

a hunros a Radyo 4

ha levow hebaskhus

klappya'n myttin.


Mes yth ov vy

erbynn an ton

ow krackya yn statik

kowsoryon an Ford C-Max

loos ha leysek,

a lewyav war-rag,

a'm lew war-rag.


Fordhow a-dro ha golowysi rudh

a'm lett y'm sedh,

mes y tur an sonwedh

orth ow thenna der

an veister hanter-ygor,

ha my ow tenna

ow honan a'n A483.


Y harmav yn gis flogh

ow klowes lev an jowl

an kensa tro.

Y harmav yn le anewn

ha hanasa

my dh'y gavos

an nessa tro.


Mes y neyjav

war vysowek piano tredan,

usi an tonnow,

usi an tonyow,

ha'n kerri erel yn tiswar.


Hag an ger finek ow seni,

dell goselha riff daslavarus,

y stummav an ros-lewya,

ha lughesa sinel rudhvelyn

a-ves dhe’n kronkyans

y'm tyller parkya usadow.

Rockstar taw.


Blodsvept

I step into the car

“bluetooth connected”

and wait a moment

as the engine warms up,

as the beat warms up.


Drums beat,

notes ignite

and I am reaching

a hundred miles in my ear.


The gear box grunts

passing landscapes

of sleepy cottages

that dream of Radio 4

and the calming voices 

of morning chatter.


But I am

against the tune

crackling in the static

of the Ford C-Max’s speakers

grey and muddy,

I drive forward,

I am driven forward.


Roundabouts and red lights

block me in my seat,

but the soundscape continues

pulling me through

the half-opened window,

and I am pulling

myself from the A483.


I shout like a child

listening to the voice of the devil

for the first time.

I shout in the wrong place

and whisper

that I’ll get it

the next time.


But I’m flying

on an electric piano’s keys,

that are waves,

that are tunes,

and the other cars are unaware.


As the final word sings,

as the repeating riff quietens,

I twist the steering wheel,

and flash an orange signal

out of beat

in my usual parking place.

A silent rockstar.

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