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MiSkriBa 12 2024 - 12 / 04 - Hykka Trevithick

 Rag #MiSkriBa 12, govynnys re beun dhe skrifa bardhonek a wari gen an tybyans a "hwedhel hir". Ytho yn sempel, y tewisis vy drolla Richard Trevithick, yn rann... Yn anfeusik, nyns ober an rim yn Sowsnek (heb meur a ober nyns eus termyn genev ragdho y'n eur ma).

For #NaPoWriMo 12, we have been asked to write a poem that plays with the idea of a “tall tale.” So obviously, I chose the story of Richard Trevithick. Sadly the rhyme doesn't work in English (without a lot of work, for which I have no time at the moment).

Hykka Trevithick 

An brassa tus a vew bys vykken

Hag an brassa a'n brassa esa va,

Ow sevel mar ughel avel pons an Tamar

Kyn nyns eksistyas henna hwath.


Y dhiwvregh a ystynnas a veus dhe veus

Hag yth esa brest krev yntredha,

A anellas an ayr ha gwruthyl mog tew

Ha tan monow a'y dhewfrik ow setha.


An kowr a dhen a gerdhas war rosow

Ha ny skwithsons i bythkweth,

A-les dhe dermyn an savnow down,

Mes istori piw nyns yw brith?


Yn-dann waskedh meur y sevis yn fyrv

Ow herdhya erbynn balyer metol.

Pan hwethas y dopp, gowyow a neyjas

Ha hwes a'y dal a wrug poll.


An naghoryon avius a fias yn skav

Dhe avodya sewyans an liv,

Ha ynnia y honan dhe vos hogen gwell

O tybyans an kowr heb grev.


Hag oberi a wrug war legaci dial

A'gan kar hwath dhe'n gwetha termyn.

An den ma a vew prest y'n jydh hedhyw

War bub tren helergh yma y hwerthin.


Dicky Trevithick

The greatest men live forever

And he was the greatest of great,

Standing as tall as the Tamar bridge

Even though that didn’t exist yet.


His arms extended from thumb to thumb

And between them was his strong chest,

Breathing the air to create thick smoke

As mineral fire shot from his nostrils.


This giant of a man walked on wheels

And never did they tire,

Apart from the time of the deep potholes,

But whose history isn’t bespeckled? 


Under great pressure he stood strong

Pushing against metal barrels.

When he blew his top, lies flew forth

And the sweat on his brow made a pool.


The jealous nay-sayers quickly fled

To avoid the fallout of the flood,

And forcing himself to be even better

Was the idea of this giant without woe.


And he worked on his legacy of revenge

Which carries us still to the worst of times.

This man lives still in our present age

His laugh echoes on every delayed train.




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